I am not completely sure, but I think that Batista may have written this book for children or people who have been in a coma for decades and they don't know anything that happened in world during that time.
"KISS was a hot rock band at the time. Gene Simmons, Paul Stanley, Ace Frehley, and Peter Criss were the band members. They wore face paint, played heavy metal, and were huge at the time."
If you don't know who KISS is I'm not sure that you require such an in depth, and superfluous, explanation. By telling the reader that they were hot at the time you don't really need to follow up two sentences later with huge at the time. There is a lot of padding in this book.
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